Try another version of the old sketch comparison

Original creative challenge · A kinder measure of progress

1. Use this invented starting situation: A new sketch is judged against a polished work by an expert.
2. Compare one chosen feature with the writer's own earlier attempt.
3. Make a small artefact that shows the change: a note, sketch, caption, or three-panel sequence.
4. Write one sentence describing what the artefact makes clearer. Keep this an experiment; no account, purchase, or public post is needed.