A small practice for the unsteady draft

Original practice · Optional exercise · Listening between the notes

Choose a low-stakes example you can change without affecting another person’s private information or commitments.

1. Describe the current situation in one sentence. The example here is: An original lyric reads smoothly but feels crowded when spoken.
2. Read it aloud and remove one word that competes with the rhythm.
3. Compare the result with the difficulty you named. Write one concrete observation.
4. Keep, adapt, or stop the experiment. A note about why you stopped is a valid result.